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[![Join the chat at https://gitter.im/JJ/hoborg](https://badges.gitter.im/Join%20Chat.svg)](https://gitter.im/JJ/hoborg?utm_source=badge&utm_medium=badge&utm_campaign=pr-badge&utm_content=badge)
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This is the source for an ur-[dieselpunk](https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dieselpunk) novel with a Spanish-created robot hobo in a balkanized
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United States of America at the beginning of al alternative XXth century.
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United States of America at the beginning of an alternative XXth century.
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The novel is [available in Amazon.com for a dollar](https://www.amazon.com/dp/B00ED084BK/ref=as_li_ss_til?tag=perltutobyjjmere&camp=0&creative=0&linkCode=as4&creativeASIN=B00ED084BK&adid=1HG3N2ZNW9C40MFDC9WP&).
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After the United States of America is defeated by a technologically superior Cuba and
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Spain, Florida becomes an independent multiracial socialist state
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which is inmediately at war with the (now diminished) America.
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which is immediately at war with the (now diminished) America.
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A North-American Pinkerton agent is sent there to recover a
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*mechanical man* that has been seen in a circus doing gigs from
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The novel is roughly completed (that is, it's got an ending, it will
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actually never be finished since it might evolve in time) and
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published it in Amazon.com and the rest of the Amazon shops. Since all
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actually never be finished since it might evolve in time) and is
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published in Amazon.com and the rest of the Amazon shops. Since all
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your contributions will be here, in the repo, they are obviously
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acknowledged, but I'll acknowledge it also in the prologue itself and,
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if I earn enough to be able to physically print it and mail it, will
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Just go to [the novel](text/text.md). You can also
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[read about the characters](text/characters.md), although doing so
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might result in spoilerage, or about the
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might result in spoiling the story for yourself, or about the
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[geography of the Republic of Florida](text/geography.md).
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Thanks
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Many thanks to those that have provided
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Many thanks to those who have provided
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[fixes and suggestions](https://github.com/JJ/hoborg/pulls?q=is%3Apr+is%3Aclosed)
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to the text: [`yarikoptic`](https://github.com/yarikoptic) and [`quentessential`](http://github.com/quentessential).
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How this can help you write your own novel
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Read the [installation instructions](INSTALL.md) to get your very own novel going in Github. They are long-ish, but may be worth the while.
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Read the [installation instructions](INSTALL.md) to get your very own novel going in Github. They are long-ish, but may be worth your while.
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Navigating the repository
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the novel text itself as well as scraps we might need for
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later. [resources](resources/README.md) contains HTML templates,
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images and other non-text stuff. [apps](apps/README.md) includes
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conversion scripts and other mainly Perl scripts I use for managing
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this. [Text-Hoborg](Text-Hoborg/README) contains a Perl module that is
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conversion scripts and other scripts I use for managing
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this, mainly written in Perl. [Text-Hoborg](Text-Hoborg/README) contains a Perl module that is
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used for testing and continuous integration and might eventually
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contain the novel itself and be released that way.
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Get in touch
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If you have some issue related to the novel, [use the GitHub
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issues](https://github.com/JJ/hoborg/issues), any other business, just
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issues](https://github.com/JJ/hoborg/issues). For any other business, just
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[email me](mailto:hoborg@merelo.net).

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