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Co-authored-by: Liza Mock <[email protected]>

src/platforms/javascript/guides/electron/configuration/integrations/electronbreadcrumbs.mdx

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-Captures breadcrumbs for events for many of Electrons built-in modules. The breadcrumbs captured for each module can be configured `true` to capture all events or `false` to capture no events. Alternatively you can supply a function which is passed the event name and returns `true` or `false` depending on whether the event should be captured.
+Captures breadcrumbs for events for many of Electron's built-in modules. The breadcrumbs captured for each module can be configured `true` to capture all events or `false` to capture no events. Alternatively, you can supply a function which is passed the event name and returns `true` or `false`, depending on whether the event should be captured.
 
 The defaults for this integration are effectively:
 

src/platforms/javascript/guides/electron/configuration/integrations/mainprocesssession.mdx

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-Captures sessions linked to the lifetime of the Electron main process. These sessions result in [release health](/product/releases/health/) statistics being displayed in Sentry.
+Captures sessions linked to the lifetime of the Electron main process. Capturing sessions makes it possible to show [release health](/product/releases/health/) statistics in Sentry.
 
 Unless `autoSessionTracking` is set to `false`, this integration will be automatically added.