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The subheadline is a bit bumpy:

Building self-hosted products that allow you to be productive without losing control

"products" and "productive" clash, and why the "building"? We should be talking about what the product does for people, not what we do?

E.g.:

The self-hosted platform that makes you productive without losing control

What do you think @jospoortvliet @shironextcloud

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I don't like "makes you productive", because it doesn't make you productive, it helps but there's no magic here. But tbh I don't have a better idea :/ Maybe @jospoortvliet has one?

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How about

The self-hosted productivity platform that keeps you in control

Even shorter too :)

@jospoortvliet jospoortvliet merged commit 48ff331 into master Apr 21, 2019
@jospoortvliet jospoortvliet deleted the subline-wording branch April 21, 2019 18:55
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