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@mfisher87 mfisher87 commented Jan 3, 2025

Updated to:

  1. Refrain (in the musical meaning of the word) themes from the Project Jupyter mission statement
  2. "Reimagine" over "re-envision". It's more open-ended, collaborative, and less unilateral-sounding
  3. "Approachability" over "accessibility" -- the latter is broad and can be interpreted many ways. The former emphasizes that desktop GIS is less intimidating and fearful for learners.
  4. In the concluding sentence, focusing on growing the number of people who can confidently engage feels more tangible than saying we're increasing confidence.

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@mfisher87 mfisher87 force-pushed the elevator-pitch-revision branch from 51fbc80 to 988a7ce Compare January 3, 2025 23:56
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Feedback still more than welcome. Merging because I think this is a clear improvement and I'm referencing this text in a new blog post in #6

@mfisher87 mfisher87 merged commit e947b32 into main Jan 8, 2025
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Sorry for being late to the review party as this has already been merged, but I wanted to leave on the record how delighted I am with this messaging, I think you did a terrific job @mfisher87!!

Thanks so much - we can always make further fine-tuning as the project evolves, but I think this captures things very well at this point!

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Thanks so much for the kind words, Fernando! 🥰

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